Hello I am going to travel to Bombay,to visit and to work in a hotel. One day I where with a friend,that work with me,in a pub when suddenly a bomb explote,a lot of people died. Ihad to go to an other country I chose Spain because I think it is a very good country,but I didn´t find a job,I had to go to Germany ,thereIlive the rest of my life.
Hello,I went to visit Italy an a iam going to tell you my trip there. I was playing soccer and an Italian coach saw me and said that if I wanted to play football in a team called Milan,I was very sorprised because I dont play soccer very well. I started to train In Monday 15 of January and I did a lot of friends there,the coach said to me that we are going to play the `Champion´,and if I wanted to play it with them, I of course acepted it because it was my opportunity to be famous in Italy and to my sorprise we won the cup and we went to a bar to celebrated it. This was my trip to Italy.
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ResponderEliminarHello I am going to travel to Bombay,to visit and to work in a hotel.
One day I where with a friend,that work with me,in a pub when suddenly a bomb explote,a lot of people died.
Ihad to go to an other country I chose Spain because I think it is a very good country,but I didn´t find a job,I had to go to Germany ,thereIlive the rest of my life.
David, this is not what I was expecting. Check the task and complete it in a correct way.
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Please, try harder. This is not enough.
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Hello,I went to visit Italy an a iam going to tell you my trip there.
ResponderEliminarI was playing soccer and an Italian coach saw me and said that if I wanted to play football in a team called Milan,I was very sorprised because I dont play soccer very well.
I started to train In Monday 15 of January and I did a lot of friends there,the coach said to me that we are going to play the `Champion´,and if I wanted to play it with them, I of course acepted it because it was my opportunity to be famous in Italy and to my sorprise we won the cup and we went to a bar to celebrated it.
This was my trip to Italy.